Never Give Up

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Never Give Up

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Never give up, don’t ever give up
It’s the secret to success and has no part in luck

The road that we start will always have an end
Your goals and your dreams are around the next bend

The love in your heart will help you to proceed
Patience and faith are also what you’ll need

So, when you want to quit just give a little smile
And know that success is only one more mile

Never give up make sure you see it through
If only you would try, you’ll know it to be true

Never look back on failures of the past
Never look ahead and wonder if you can last

Instead, hurdle today the obstacles that you see
And never, never ever say I’m doing this just for me
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Post by Sumansona1344 »

It's such a great lyric poetry! I hope you write more, and I wish to read more of your work!
I like your writing style. It is easy to understand and the rhyming sounds good too!
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Thank you for your kind words. Much appreciated.
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This is good! I especially like the part..."So, when you want to quit just give a little smile
And know that success is only one more mile".
Well done! You should write more!
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Just as they say, "Hope springs eternal." If there's life, there's hope. Never give up.
"In the beginning was the word.........John 1:1"
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Post by ANDREW MBAGO »

Good motivational poem! Every road has an end and that's what life is all about.
Don't give up or loose hope in life and everything will change.
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That was so encouraging. Amazing poem. I really needed to read this.
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When ever I touch someone in my writing I know why I write. Thank you for your comment.
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Also meant to say, your victory is almost there. Don't Give Up.
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I'll never give up, your sweet, thank you for the smile.
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