A Hopeless Wish

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thisgirl818
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A Hopeless Wish

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dear brown eyes and crooked smiles
i dedicate myself to you
under this hopeless sky
on a rooftop with fairy lights
sleeping bags and candle lights
I fell in love with you
will you give yourself to me?
forever and and always may just be
a fragment of a broken melody
I see how scared you are
your eyes reflected into mine
as you hold me warm and tight
A secret love in the livid nights
I hope we won't ever wake up
in this fairytale we dreamed of
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Beautiful! The descriptions are vivid and dreamy! I can also relate to this! Thank you!! Well done!
"Even the smallest person can change the course of the future." - Galadriel
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