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Amalia Lantano
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Begged the universe for you to be mine
Cause you are so damn fine
Looked at you and noticed the long line
I'd do anything to be first in line

You smile at everyone
But I feel you being alone
Everyone sees you like some kind of a bone
You threw yourself at everyone like a stone

Forced to be nice at everyone
Never had the chance to be at home
Or the chance to feel at home
Forced to please everyone

I want to hug you and give you a kiss
I guess that would forever be on my list
I wish you all the best
Like an admirer in the mist
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