What Grace Means to Me

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Shirley Ann Riddern Labzentis
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Post by Shirley Ann Riddern Labzentis »

Great poem! I am not a poet myself but this poem gives me the inspiration to maybe try to write one.
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Post by daniella bukharin »

This poem really spoke to me today Scott
Thank you for putting ur thoughts into words and healing us all
God bless u
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:tiphat: I really like the last line. I stopped and thought about where I am on my journey through life. Really well thought out piece. Bravo 👏
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Post by Brenda Hernandez Hernandez »

I love it!!! It speaks to everyone in every aspect that you can possibly imagine. My favorite was, “ to choose to turn your life around before it is too late and there is no life left to turn around.
I’m there now… You did great!!! It’s beautiful.
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Post by Linda Ramon »

Your poem is very interesting. I have not ever read one like it before. I feel as if your in an inner fight with a negative and positive force of your own making and don't know which way to get out. You want to be treated in a way that shows others that you have feelings and that you want to be treated as an equal just like the rest of us do. I for one get from your poem, that maybe you have shut your self out from people because you have had a hard time dealing with disrespect. Me too. I feel you all the way. Great poem.
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Post by Treasure Elendu »

I must admit that I'm inspired. Let me add one that came to my head while I was reading. "To give without expectations." Thanks for this inspiring piece.
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Post by BELEN FORTES »

I loved it!!
Very well thougt poem, sum’s up life perfectly. I wish we were all able to act this way.
Thank you for sharing! Great piece of work :)
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Post by Perry Wade »

Hopefully will get others to think of God's grace.
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Post by GianK »

Really great!!
Makes you think and feel.
Thank you for sharing.
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Post by Larissa Wilkerson »

Great poem everyone should strive to live that way.
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Post by Ginamarie71 »

That was very inspiring, and full of emotion!! Great work!!
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Post by Ginamarie71 »

That was very inspiring, and full of emotion!! Great work!!
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Post by MadihaFatima »

Well thought and well written!
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Post by Tah Stephany »

From the topic one might think it's a letter to a loved one called grace but when you start reading you realize that it talks about are different struggles in life
It's a good story but it should be a little more specific at the beginning to let the readers know what they are reading about to avoid confusion
Overall it's a good poem I love it it touches all the different phases in life if how I wish we could live like this
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Post by Villa malela »

The statements in the poem talks about what we want to be in sour daily life. It's all about setting boundaries. The last line is what happens when we hit rock bottom and don't know what decision to make
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