Flowers of Deception

Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
Post Reply
User avatar
Muzainah Shahrukh
Posts: 1
Joined: 15 Apr 2023, 08:55
Bookshelf Size: 0

Flowers of Deception

Post by Muzainah Shahrukh »

I would love to hear reviews!
If you can, please give feedback here and on the writing platform booksie. My pen name is M.S.Y, and if you search the title of the poem, it will turn up the same result.
Thank you, I hope you enjoy the poem!

Flowers of Deception:

Rich as blood,

Lush like wine,

Its moisture smooth cream,

Bewitching to the eye,


Just as of love,

You draw toward it,

Nimbly pulling at stalk,

Grazing frail arrow heads,


Then it intercepts,

Digging through skin,

Plunging through flesh,

Drowning in gore,


Aghast, you pull back,

Drawing finger,

Scarlet descending,

Shunting the blood flower behind.
Top
Post Reply

Return to “Creative Original Works: Poetry”