I am Black

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Lopuyo Lokwawi
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I am Black

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I AM BLACK
It is not irritating.
Neither white nor red.
This is me,
I am black.

It is my color.
If to you it’s unappealing,
That’s no problem for me.
I am made of black.
So, I am black.

Black shines.
Black brightens.
I love this,I mean black.
I am black.

Sister, why are you adjusting?
They said you’re ugly,So, you believed?
Oh no, see you becoming ugly.
Smooth and shiny,
See, I am black.

Look at you, becoming spotty.
You are black, we are black.
Black is wonderful,
Proudly BLACK.

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Fester John
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Post by Fester John »

Nice poem to read and learn from
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Esther Godwin Ogechi
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Post by Esther Godwin Ogechi »

I love this!!! I wrote something similar to this. I pray this race of rainbow love themselves and accept each others' uniqueness. Great work👍
For I know the thought I have for you, says the Lord, thoughts of peace, not of evil, to give you an expected end.Jeremiah 29:11
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Lopuyo Lokwawi
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Post by Lopuyo Lokwawi »

I appreciate your comment.
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Post by Faisal Akbar journalist »

All holy books are also written in black letters, so the color and race of a person is nothing more than his identity. All are equal in the sight of God, but the one who establishes peace on earth and loves all human beings is more valuable
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Post by Jeremy Hennessee »

Good work man.
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