Awakening to Life's Truth

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Life's journey is shaped by our choices, a canvas for creativity,
A beautiful and meaningful tapestry, a realm of possibility.

Let's not be deceived but unleash our inner best,
This is no jest, it's a call to pass life's grand test.

Life's not just a playground, it's a profound school,
Where hidden truths await, shaping us as the rule.

Who can provide remedies for life's myriad maladies?
Life's puzzles and complexities, they cause us unease.

Our strong ones often fail to mend their own ways,
Their promises of change lost in a world's haze.

I seek kindred souls, though they may be few,
I'll speak my truth aloud, for that's what I'll do.

Shall we let humanity be led into chains?
Or rise from the ashes, breaking these reins?

No one can fathom another's intent,
Evil arises from intention, not by accident.

Let's forge a new order, challenge the dark,
Stand strong, unite, and kindle life's spark.

Illusions surround us, aiming to distract,
But we'll rise above, reclaim what they've hijacked.

Their worth measured by predictions they cling,
Our world they've marred, but we'll make it sing.

The time is here, the moment is now,
Awaken from slumber, let's rewrite our vow.

Embrace responsibility with hearts pure and light,
Shed arrogance, seek truth, and live life right.


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Please, read my poem and give suggestion on how I can improve on my poem writing. Thanks.
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