Where I went wrong

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Where I went wrong

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Where I went wrong.......
    
Innocent child,
Eager for everything,
Passion for friends.
Love to collect all small items,
Always exciting rays coming out .
Ready to help

Ready to have fun
Ready to explore.
No one cared ...

Carefree teen.....
New sunshine
Ready to collect all the twinkling stars
Moon looked so near and dear.
But alas....
Feel low...
No one around to hold.....

Maturity comes along.
Changing all the spirits.
All took away the shades of life.
Duties and duties gave the pure diamond between the hair.
All the surroundings took the best .
According to the nature  going through the crossroad...
No one around to hold.....
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