THE FOURTH MAN

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No need for further contemplation,
Humanity's challenges are immeasurable,
Life's agony often feels doubly unendurable.

It excludes no one, regardless of wealth,
A factor for all who breathe, for all who eat,
Alone, you bear it, nursing a fearful beat.

Families grapple with evergreen strife,
Even the youth know of life's bitter knife.
When you rise above "buts" and correction's grind,
When you step out from humanity's problem bind,

This occurs when the fourth man takes the stand,
Unseen yet real, a helping hand,
The fourth man is found through trials, you see,
As Nebuchadnezzar witnessed, a lasting decree.

Shedrack, Meshach, and Abednego, their ego intact,
Faced challenges head-on, an unwavering act,
Knowing the fourth man would aid and appease,
In tribulations, He brings the best release.

Especially in times of great confrontation,
He offers solutions, a divine revelation,
With the fourth man by your side,
You'll stand tallest, with strength as your guide.
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Love this!
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Reflection2710 wrote: 16 Sep 2023, 06:40 Love this!
Thanks.
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