Christianity and Jesus' offer

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Jason Rosenquist
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Christianity and Jesus' offer

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Handshake with Jesus


Wait...

So let me get this straight.

You're saying there's a reason

my behavior can be so displeasing?

And it goes all the way back to the beginning,

when a snake convinced some woman to start sinning?

And no matter the time or place,

we are just a fallen race?

Sentenced to doom and gloom,

until a virgin grows a baby in her womb,

we kill him and throw him in a tomb?

But he comes back on day three?

Are you kidding me?

But wait- that's not all

He'll save anyone who'll call

all I have to do is believe

and I won't go to hell, I'll get a reprieve?

All of this sounds just a tad bit shady...

But it could be true, just maybe...

Jesus? You'd better be real

because this sounds like a hell of a deal!

You can have my soul. Here- take it.

As soon as you take my hand and shake it....
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