Thoughts of my new love

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James Laurence
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Thoughts of my new love

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With lazy grace she reaches out to grasp the rays of rising sun
And blinks away a fleeing dream, a memory, and then it's gone.
Contented sighs she settles back, a new smile plays across her face
Recalling now another time and visions of another place.

A memory of long ago
A memory of far away
When fate and circumstance combined to bring a future into play...
Glances, dances, dying phone
A few hours grabbed pre journey home.
Two minds connect
Starved hearts find joy
A goodbye kiss from her new "boy".

A stirring brings her back to now
A warm embrace that brings her near
A pair of lips that kiss her neck
A "Melisa" whispered in her ear.
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Post by Modupe Agbelekale »

It looks like a poem that comes to mind when you are staring at your girl while she was also staring out something far away.
Last edited by Modupe Agbelekale on 21 Jan 2024, 02:07, edited 1 time in total.
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Chris Konstantine
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Post by Chris Konstantine »

A sweet yet melancholy piece that will no doubt connect with many. Let me put this way, I smiled reading it. Well done.
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