Shake Me, Wake Me

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Rachel Granger
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Shake Me, Wake Me

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Shake Me, Wake Me

I'm running around in circles
My eyes are closed shut
My ears are not able to hear
My Body has gone in shock

No one around me, No one is here to help
Oh shake me, wake me, so I can run and yell

I don't know what is wrong with me
There are no tears running down my face
It's just an empty feeling as quietness surrounds
a dark lonely space

Oh shake me, wake me, I don't know what I'm up against

I was fine a month ago, I was fine yesterday
I don't know what is happening, I don't know what to say,
Oh shake me, wake me
Am I dreaming in my head

I bravely realize, as I open both my eyes
I'm laying on my bed, the covers over my head
My husband try's to shake me, wake me
but I do believe I'm dead
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