Where Are The Origin?

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Brian Ochaya
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Where Are The Origin?

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Hello My Universe,
Today I lost my mind verse,
For the things around yet in the Universe,
What could I have said to Myself?,
Yet I ask a lot and answer Myself,
A mind confusion, all illusions,
In this lonely alterations, deep conversations,

Well, where are the origin?
Man, oceans, grass, machines...,
I switched off with God,
No more chat with God,
So where are the origin?
Science, Biblical or traditional origin?
No one knows except....
Except...well except...
One man the creator of the universe,
So where are the origin?

Brian Ochaya.
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