Loss of a father

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Loss of a father

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Hello! I am a 16 year old giving poetry a second chance. Please share all opinions and criticisms as it can only help me get better.

Mirror Mirror - Chy Scott


mirror mirror on the wall,
show me the kindest , sweetest , most mentally fucked of them all .
oh that’s my daddy?
now girl don’t be surprised,
you both have that same look.
the look of loss,
the look of pain in your eyes.
but he was a warrior,
strong, brave, and tall
how did he ever let himself fall?
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