What Grace Means to Me

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Shahveir Rizwan
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Very thoughtful and well written, I loved how it covered every aspect of daily life encounters so simply yet so beautifully, and truly these are the traits of a truly graceful human
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The fine line between love and hate, the most basic of all emotions. Each emotion has its counterpart. It takes a person ever present in the moment to walk that fine line.
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Post by Okeoghene Dan-Ekere »

A beautiful, educative piece. It faces a common human issue, that is, where to set the boundaries without limiting ourselves to such a small space that we can hardly move around freely or even breathe. This poem indicates what true values are. It tells us that we should strive for the best but be careful not to drive ourselves into extremities.

Well written Scott Hughes
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Post by Santoshi Pandey 1 »

Loved your choice of wordings and the way you express them❤️❤️
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Post by Arpan Arya »

Here Grace means to me a kindness towards ourselves as well as others. Here poet talks about the balance between our inner self and outer self. The poem taught the art of managing our aspect with the society's aspect.
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A thought provoking piece.However at the time when we need to turn our lives around, is one at that pivotal point when one still has hope and faith that there is a choice to be made .
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Post by Muhumuza Answer »

This poem speaks of how I have been feeling for a long time but couldn't put it in to words. Am very happy that someone out there wrote my innermost self without any reservations. This has helped me to give shape to my feelings and set my priorities right.
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Post by Marietjie Goldfarb »

Such a resonance of the balance grace gives us. Wisdom to not go beyond the boundaries of sensibleness, but not given to extremities, either.

Good one, Scott.
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Post by Palesa Phooko »

I liked the last part of the poem. It is so close to one proverb that can be interpreted as follows: once you realize you are lost, change the direction because if you continue walking the same path, it would be so difficult to go back to where you started at.
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Post by Rubina zaheer »

You describe the correct definition of the human life .but in my point of you ,you should define creative mind of human beings but this is a most beautiful grace means to me .
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Post by Meanim Okwosha »

Nice piece! I feel it can only be felt by the spirit/soul and it really touched me. I'm in real awe of it.
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[I enjoyed this piece, it was well thought out and written.
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Post by Lampard Mokandu »

:D I have really enjoyed the depth to which the poet expresses the various aspects of life and the different stages a person goes through.
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Post by Simon Njuki »

I think I had missed the best part ,, poetry.. now I'll be online daily.. I found my missing piece
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This piece is quite amazing and enlightening.
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