Deep in the ocean

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Rakshitha Paindla
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Deep in the ocean

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Don't know when,not even how,
Not realising where it started
Without a glimpse of how it ends,
I dived into the water

Thrown deep, unaware
That the water was an ocean..
Struck in the middle,
With no knowledge of its depths or heights

Will I be able to see the sun,
Or will I sink where the light won't reach,..
Maybe I'll rise to the surface of light again,
Or be lost in the ocean's depths.

I dream of shores I'll never touch,
A happy ending I cannot grasp,..
Stuck in the middle,
With so much in my mind,..

Here I sink, yet do not fall
Just,.. stuck there
Deep,,... In the thoughts
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