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magnus wulfson
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Post by magnus wulfson »

eyes of ice sword of fire
no time or need for lute or lyre
I was there when Lucifer fell
my sword of fire condemned him to hell

once alabaster skin all robed in white
God's right hand angel of light
jealousy and rebellion his ticket to hell
now bathed in fire skin reddened and scaled

i'll lead God's army when we come to the end
no words or prayers only sword to lend
no quarter given to those who deny
just edge of blade when Armageddon is nigh

call me Michael, call me Death
heart of stone and icy breath
faith is not mine to contemplate
I kill out of love none I hate
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Post by helen-2905 »

Beautifully written
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magnus wulfson
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Post by magnus wulfson »

thank you
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Post by GandalfTheFey »

Yeah, pretty good. I really like it!
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