Stampede

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Stampede

I looked to hope's horizon for the dawn of favorable signs

Only to see ambling toward me

And my garden of tender balloons,

A herdsey, grinning, bristly bunch

Of pugnacious porcupines.
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Yikes! :scared-eek:
~ occupare fati suffocavit

I will both lay me down in peace, and sleep: for Thou, LORD, only makest me dwell in safety. ~ Psalms 4:8
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Your poems capture ideas in both a profound and yet comic book sort of way. There is a little bit of the feel of Lewis Caroll's poem Jabberwocky about it. .... I LIKE IT !

More please?
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thanks for reading and your kind comment.
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