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Post by rythmicjea »

Raining is a chance to cleanse the soul.
I was born in January to the ice and snow.

I love it when it rains.
In it, I like to walk, dance and play.

I've heard people say,
When it rains God is crying.
But stick out your tongue,
Does that taste like tears?

Each drop of rain is the same,
But each snowflake is different.

We are the rain.

We are made in His Image,
Yet we are all different.

There are days when I don't want to walk int he rain.
Those are the days that I can't give up control.
But each time I do,
I relinquish the reins just a little bit more.

So let me take my place
And trust in what he has in store.

Because He brings the rain so we can change and grow
And was away all of our sorrow.

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Happy Reading!
Lea
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