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ncoard
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Happy Birthday.

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Tick, Tick, Tick.
It’s fading, I’m fading.
This is how the poem’s written,
a girl is born, she lives, then she dies.

If I blow out the candles will my heart survive?
You can be honest,
I promise I’ll blow them out anyway.

The flames flicker, there’s not much time left,
but also a whole life worth of moments.

- N.C.
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The more I read this the more I like it and the deeper its message becomes.

Thank you for posting this!
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Wow I love this. It's very interested. You did a great job.
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