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Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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Bookwyrm719
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Escape the world
On an adventure
Take my hand
Ill lead the way
Across the words
Over the pages
A new world to see
A new person to be
Read till the end
Then start again
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This sounds like a very accurate description of what happens when one reads.

-- 19 Jun 2015, 21:43 --

This sounds like a very accurate description of what happens when one reads. It's a very good poem.
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Post by Bookwyrm719 »

Thanks I haven't written much poetry before so I was kinda nervous posting this
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Post by meganxxcooper »

This is really good! You should put yourself out more and try to add more poems (even about reading) to this one! I'm very impressed and if you need anyone to read your work I'd love to! :D
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Thank you so much I will add more
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Post by DATo »

This should be the Online Bookclub's manifesto - emblazoned on the front page of the website *LOL*!

Well done!
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I think this is definitely well written and something a lot of people on this site can specifically relate to. Reading to me is a tiny escape of normal life, and a chance to experience all the new things that I couldn't otherwise.
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