Mask of Empty Definitions

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rythmicjea
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Mask of Empty Definitions

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The words...
They ebb and flow to your heart's content,
There is no regard for what stories are written,
No proof of truth just misconception.

Please!
Go on with your words
Because they do not take center stage.
It's your pretty little face that does;
But, it's those empty definitions
That will make a lasting impression.

So take your words,
Weave them tight,
Because once you lose that pretty little face...
Those words, that you have no regard for,
Will be the mask you bear.

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Happy Reading!
Lea
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Lea..I absolutely love this poem. I just sat here and read it then re-read it at least 5 more times. It's beautiful.
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This surprised me so so much, it's so beautiful. You definitely have a talent with writing and you shouldn't ever give that up.
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