The proud man

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The proud man

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I don't want no trouble
That's what he said in his mind
But his lips are lying
They boast and spout threats
A coward putting up a whitewash facade
Fear strikes

Then he thinks to himself
'Is that you death?
Don't come just yet,
I still have so many things left to..
Gulp, I better swallow my pride before I...'

Thud
Blood oozes
As he looses...
Beep Beep Beeeeeeeeeeeep Be..
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