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Jaime Lync
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"The more the words
The less the meaning
And how does that profit anyone? "
Those are the words of a wise King
Is anyone listening?

Words are vessels of life or death
They can set a heart on flame
See it melt
Vaporize
Rise
Or
Fall
Due to a death sentence
That turned a heart stone cold

So let's remember when we write
we use words to paint a portrait
It is not in black and white
Not just love or hate
There is a kalediscope of images and emotions that we produce
But I refuse
Not to write without considering the impact
Of what is written
Because it is written
You can be snared by the words you speak
So let's speak life
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Christina O Phillips
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I love this!
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