Where Do You Belong

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Ayobami Kehinde
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Where Do You Belong

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Where do you really belong?
This moment you blow hot, the next you breathe cold.
Today you speak as someone having a form of godliness,
tomorrow you defy the power thereof.
It's better you define whose camp you really are and stop being on the fence,
For the Lord will spew out everyone as such.
But I'll beseech you by the mercies of God that you fully switch to the camp of Jesus the Son.

Written on 27-July-2013
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Mashell Chapeyama
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Post by Mashell Chapeyama »

I like it. You created a poem from a theme most us would fail to create one. This shows that it is written from the heart to achieve such a feat.
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DarleneCabrera
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Post by DarleneCabrera »

This just warms my heart
Life has a way of testing a person's will, either by nothing happen at all, or by everything happen at once.


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