The Tunnel

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The Tunnel

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His steps went left and right
As we see a red light
Going through the tunnel it gets darker
And the footsteps got louder

As it slowly began to dim
The thoughts starts to get him
The constant guilt was consuming
Convincing himself to start believing

It was his fault, he admit
Suffering the consequences for the sin he commit

Inspired by Dreams(1990) by Akira Kurosawa
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