A beautiful world we had

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Adeboboye Olugbenga
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A beautiful world we had

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Gone are the days of old
Beauty thereof you may not have been told
The little birds so sweet they sang
Great to behold was the crystal clean spring,
Blissful atmosphere from morn till eventide
And in this comeliness we all took pride
But so fast all's gone,
And a hideous world is born
A world pathetically technophilic
The fullness of it ruefully optimistic
Though the situation not totally bad
But it was a beautiful world we had
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Ambreen Kiran
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Post by Ambreen Kiran »

Such a Nice Poem
Thanks a lot for Sharing
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Post by Vivian Paschal »

"Though the situation not totally bad
But it was a beautiful world we had"

Nice one Boye, thanks a lot for the opportunity to read this.
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Gabyap
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Post by Gabyap »

Lovely poem, Adeboboye
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