Her Kind Of Witchery

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Her Kind Of Witchery

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Her Kind Of Witchery

She makes my eyes burn,
Yet she knows better than
This rushed hand that grips,
Hastily disarmed at her hair tips;
What type of trickery is this?

I do whatever I want to,
Make you move like you do;
Feeling soft bumps slide through;
Hard, as you're making me too;
Is this some kind of witchery you do?
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*This one I did many years back, you can probably find the last stanza in a site if you google. I'm not crazy about poetry these days; I don't write much anymore. But I wanted to know what you guys think about it...
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Post by Gabyap »

I'll definitely google it, great piece.
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