My Faraway Love

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shybrandon5
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Kisses through the darkened night
Our minds forever racing
No wrong could ever stop this right
No demons will we be facing

But Love, only you,
Could stop my heart.
Dear, will you be true
Don't let us part

Dancing in your loving arms
Your gaze holding mine tightly
Your lips are holding Cupid's charms
Blowing whispers towards me lightly

How my tears glisten
My feet frozen
But will you listen
My boy, my man

To a hope, in our dreams
To our love, forever pure
A love built on fiction,
A wondrous journey we'll endure.
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Akosua +
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Post by Akosua + »

"A love built on fiction... '
It's deep. I like that
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