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Pasha Ru, have you written music to it on the guitar?
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No, I haven't. I think it would be a pretty short song. :lol:
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You smart-aleck. HA HA. Yeah, it would be a ditty, like a jingle. Or... it could be a full-length song with a really long riff.
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Or a run-of-the-mill pop song, where they repeat the same thing over and over again ad nauseam.
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Oh, blanche. No, I think you're capable of more than that. :-)
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You're too kind. Don't overestimate me, though. I'm just a Russian-looking finger with glasses. A figment of a psychotic's imagination. An undigested bit of beef, a blot of mustard, a crumb of cheese, a fragment of underdone potato. There's more of gravy than of grave about me, whatever I am!

Sorry, Dickens just took over my brain for a moment.
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And a goatee. Don't forget the goatee.

I can completely relate. My brain is always overtaken by something as well. Usually nothing so glamorous as Dickens. Hey, I want to PM you. Incoming...
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Oh my God! This touched my heart. There are few things which you can just feel. But you have put that feel in beautiful words. I can't thank you enough for this. :)
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anakandwal+ wrote:Oh my God! This touched my heart. There are few things which you can just feel. But you have put that feel in beautiful words. I can't thank you enough for this. :)
Wow, thank you so much! I'm quite flattered, and your kind words mean a lot.
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I was very moved. You are quite the poet. :)
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bookowlie wrote:I was very moved. You are quite the poet. :)
Haha, thank you. But I'm really not.
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Please don't make one of us say, "You're a poet and you didn't know it!" AARGH!
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zeldas_lullaby wrote:Please don't make one of us say, "You're a poet and you didn't know it!" AARGH!
I will pay MUCHO MONEY to keep you from saying that! :hand:
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AAAUGH! BookOwlie, are you seeing this? He gave me the hand!!

HA HA HA. OK, I won't say it!
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I just saw this post. Omigosh the hand. It's like the sun...don't look at it directly. :hand:

Time for the bananaramas. :banana-rock: :banana-jumprope: :banana-guitar: :banana-tux:
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