What Grace Means to Me

Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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Re: What Grace Means to Me

Post by Phindi Valencai »

To be motivated but not greedy, wow really like it true really ,greedy tend to be hatred...
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Post by Samson Flomo 1 »

To have grace mean to be under the control of the Divine
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Post by Lisa Nou »

It is very inspiring indeed. We all go through some level of difficulties where situations could not be understood. Great words of courage, strength and full of possibilities.
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Post by Ma Danica Castor »

This poem is a thoughtful and introspective exploration of what grace means to the poet. Through a series of contrasting pairs of qualities and actions, the poem articulates a vision of a balanced and harmonious life. The poet stresses the importance of being confident without being arrogant, brave without being reckless, and motivated without being greedy. The poem also highlights the importance of treating oneself and others with kindness, love, and forgiveness, while also being assertive and setting healthy boundaries.

I love that the poem's language is clear and concise, and the use of contrasting pairs creates a sense of balance and harmony. The poet's message is a call to live a life that is both fulfilling and sustainable, one that balances individual self-determination with a concern for others and the larger world.

Overall, this is a well-crafted poem that offers a thoughtful and nuanced exploration of what grace means, and it is a call to live a balanced and harmonious life.
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Post by Aqsa Aqsa Iqbal »

This poem is abut life and how can you send your life.this poem is very thoughtful and given as a good message
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Post by Abdul-Malik Hassan »

"To achieve ultimate inner peace without having to first suffer ultimate outward devastation."

Having a sense of intuition is something worth paying attention to.
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Post by Micheline Sarkis »

Such deep reflections that needs calm and confident heart and inner peace to be able to see the wisdom in God gifts.
Well done Scott
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Post by Peter Makh »

I just love the lines, their flow bring more reflection of people inflows and correction to the misjudged
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Post by Patrina Ricketts »

Beautiful piece, great concept to apply to one's life.
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Post by Soydea Bramwell »

This poem has touched so many strong points. Boundaries exist and they're not to be crossed by The he or The she. I like These Two Lines...."Be Alive But Not Discontent"....."Be Content But Not Dead."
This Poem Makes It Clear There Are Various Experiences That One Can Have But It's Never Over Until It's Over..
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Post by LaRie Buell »

Love it! Very well written. I enjoyed it and I also agree.
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Post by lizzy171 »

This is beautiful and assertive. It illustrates that even though we want to be definitive, then we should do it without contradicting ourselves. Thank you for this, a lot of us don't know how to open up and say the things that really matter.
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Post by Jacqueline Walters »

To achieve ultimate inner peace without suffering total outward devastation ...can this really be achieved??
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To achieve ultimate inner peace without suffering total outward devastation ...can this really be achieved??
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Post by Gladys Mwaura »

I love this piece since it talks about what we grow through in our everyday life it also educated us on how we can live our lives without complications.
It is a very good poem and I would suggest that the writer should write more like this one since it is very educative to both the young and the old
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