What Grace Means to Me

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Kristi Royal
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I really like it! Really makes you think about things in a different view. I appreciate you sharing!
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Shafina Amin
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Post by Shafina Amin »

This one of the most beautiful poem I have ever read in my life and it is like a reflection of the life we are living and I am able to relate
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Post by Kieran Greenwood 1 »

I believe this poem is a quality outline for people to follow showing good values and maintaining innocence to high level to keep the person safe from harm and create harmony.
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Post by Reagan Ally »

Wow. That's very heartfelt and powerful... It really touched me.
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Post by Shubham Khatkar »

This poem is about self awareness, self control, choices of life , society and most importantly inner peace.
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Post by Rinsha Sharif kp »

This poem really touched my heart. The fact that one can set boundaries without crossing the lines, how true that statement is. Well thought out.
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Post by Akinkuoroye Fiyinfoluwa »

This piece just shows you, a lot to look forward to in life, being resilient and strong even during the hardship. It also shows the importance of a strong heart
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Post by Vera Mutheu »

A simple poem on having the best by not having to experience the worst. To understand that life is a journey that comes to an end and the time one has to focus on the bright side. A beautiful way to express what the writer equates to GRACE.
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Post by Sneha Singh 23 »

Through contrasting ideas, it highlights the essence of grace as a harmony between strength and humility. Inspiring and thought-provoking, the poem encourages a mindful and intentional approach to life.
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Post by Emem Nnesoma »

To love and forgive unconditionally but trust intelligently
is really inspiring to me i love this line
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Post by Reader 16 »

This is such a simple but powerful poem. It inspires growth and a new perspective because it has such a refreshing message about balance, self control and resilience.
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Post by William Ruiz »

From the picture, is it safe to assume you are a Veteran? Your poem invites self reflection for the reader. Very thoughtful poem.
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Post by Gabriel Jemita »

The poem is about finding the right balance in life—being strong, brave, and confident without letting those qualities turn into arrogance or carelessness. It teaches living wisely, accepting what you can't control, and striving for inner peace while still facing life's battles.
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Post by Lillian Lazaro »

I guess I’m not someone who enjoys poetry since I felt that each line sounded like a motivational poster (with the exception of the Yoda line, rephrasing “Do or not there is no try”). ‘Push yourself to be the best version of you without taking it too far’ wasn’t the message I was expecting from a poem about grace. It also lacked a fluidity that bridged one line to the next. It felt more like bullet points.
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Post by Kat D 1 »

I really liked this poem! Finding the happy middle ground is something I think we all struggle with sometimes. This is a nice reminder to continue working to achieve your goals while still appreciating the positives currently in your life.
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