What Grace Means to Me

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Vuyelwa Evelyn Tembe
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The paradigm of living under life's microscope is the want and will.
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This is a lovely peace of work, if you ask me this can be something that everyone can/should tead.
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Post by Cherry Red »

This poem beautifully explains how a human can be graceful,can be beautiful inside out,can be his true self but still not being arrogant or too self absorbent.According to poet,grace lies in simply living life to the fullest yet being humble.
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Post by Mariam Anyango »

What a great piece, there's so much to overcome but imagine what it means to overcome.
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Post by Jessica Anaba »

It's a very thoughtful and insightful list of goals. It's clear that you've put a lot of thought into what you want to achieve in life. I particularly like how you've framed each goal as a balancing act between two seemingly opposing qualities. It's a reminder that true strength lies in finding the right balance in life, rather than simply striving for extremes.
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Post by Oziel Leite Milhomem »

The poem presents an interesting thematic proposal, but it suffers from an excess of information and detailed descriptions, which dilute the text's emotional and aesthetic strength. By explaining everything in the smallest details, the author compromises the reader's freedom of interpretation, an essential element in poetic art.
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Post by YV Min »

Well, well. The each and every line has its own mean that go though the soul of one's body. Like, damn, it seems to give motivation and talk about how we should not give af to the society. Being ourselves, is no less than an art. I just loved it. It's really written in a sober and beautiful way which is easy to understand.
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Post by Bushra Ashraf 1 »

I just love it, the thought is very inspiring,
The line,
To be kind, but not dishonest
Is touch my heart
Very inspiring and nice poem.
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Post by Sibghat Mehmood »

I like the words stubbornly decisive and self determined... Perhaps i am one who needs these words in my life.. Such a motivational piece of thinking..
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Post by davi nunes 4 »

"Wise words, but out of the entire writing, this was my favorite part: (Choosing to change your life before it's too late and there's no life left to change)." :D
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Post by Goodluck Arome »

:ugeek2: This is good. The most dangerous thing to do is choosing another man's battle.
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Post by Glory Ayamha »

IT really a touching poem and a one to remember, cuz as individuals we must have something that keeps us going and as for part 8 gave me hope too. Thanks to Grace for such a beauty
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Post by Waseem Khan 16 »

I Love this
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Post by Isha Kanojia »

Powerful meditation on balance and inner strength . These lines are crisp and rhythmic and ponders the nature of grace not as perfection but as a harmonious dance of opposing forces — confidence and humility, love and detachment, rebellion and restraint. The poem is like the author’s personal manifesto: it is wisdom, not preaching. There is its beauty: clarity, restraint, honesty. An introspective and recentering piece that is quietly profound.
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Post by Renee Moran »

It’s a grounded philosophy of grace—not as something passive or ethereal, but as a conscious choice to rise above instinct, ego, and fear.

The piece resonates as both a guide and a mirror, asking readers to reconsider not just how they live, but why they live the way they do. It’s thoughtful, accessible, and quietly profound—a worthy read for anyone seeking clarity in chaos or peace in the pursuit of progress.
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