What Grace Means to Me

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Clement Dossou
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Re: What Grace Means to Me

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Very good 💪 poem
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Post by Priscilla Becky »

It is just on point
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Post by Annamaria Mukoka »

"To achieve ultimate inner peace without having to first suffer ultimate outward devastation."


I love this statement
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Post by shifa A »

I think it's a simple and beautiful poem which presents a list of admirable traits and attitudes, and its structure emphasizes the importance of balance and moderation in various aspects of life. The poem also encourages readers to accept their limitations and strive for inner peace, even in the face of external challenges and adversity.
Overall, the poem conveys a positive and uplifting message, emphasizing the importance of self-improvement and personal growth. However, the style and structure of the poem may feel a bit repetitive and didactic at times, and some of the phrases may come across as overly simplistic or clichéd. Nonetheless, the poem's central themes and ideas are relevant and meaningful, and its emphasis on balance and self-awareness make it a worthwhile read.
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Post by Anastasia Shitima »

Beautiful poem very inspirering
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Post by Cheryl Figueroa »

Such a thoughtful and sincere poem. It definitely is a poem I would want to read occasionally to serve as a reminder for when I get so caught up in life, losing sight of the bigger and more important moments.
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Post by Rhema Jeff Etomes 1 »

It's such a nice and balance piece, God 🙏 bless you sir
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Post by Deborah Isaac 1 »

It is very Nice and motivational
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Post by Lyn+_23 »

Congrats Scott Hughes , I really love that poem a lot thank you
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Post by Lakisha Bordley »

Crazy creative with the perfect contrasts. Straight and to the point. I enjoyed it.
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Post by Shara Wendy »

So inspiring,thank u for such good thoughts
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Post by Shara Wendy »

So inspiring,thank u for such good thoughts
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Post by Shara Wendy »

So inspiring,I like it,thank u for such beautiful thoughts
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Post by Esta PenaStoutt »

This piece sounds like a prayer that is calming. It asks for peace and strength to guide through today's trials and tribulations that are so present in today's world. It is as a necessary prayer for all in these times. I loved reading it.
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Post by Eleni Antonopoulou »

Very nice and inspiring little piece! Bravo!
When you can't beat the odds... Change the game. 🖤⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀
No mourners. No funerals. 💰 🗡️ 🎲 💣 🥞 🐺
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