What Grace Means to Me

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Emmanuel Mafabi
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Re: What Grace Means to Me

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It's really a good eye opener and shows how one can push themselves without going beyond the maximum needed effort. Please often write more.
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Layla Kate
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A very well put and beautiful poem. I feel like it captures our struggles in life and how we ought to live it out. As soon as I read it, it touched me and I could resonate to the words and how situations in life have made me feel.
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Post by Rose Anne Navato »

This poem is truly remarkable in its ability to capture profound emotions and themes in a few simple yet striking lines. I was deeply moved by its message and it has left a lasting impression on me. :)
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Post by Suzan Lulu »

Very thorough and inspirational. Speaks to the society at large
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Post by MaryGladys Wafula »

I have loved every bit of the poem, it's really inspiring I have actually gotten the last line which has really caught my attention to start now when there is still time before it's too late. And also the part about being content. Good work! Bravo!!!
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Post by James Meg »

This really hit me hard like to the core , every words in it......the writer should keep up the good work because he/she doesn't know how this is affecting people's lives mentally.
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Post by James Meg »

This really hit me hard like to the core , every words in it......the writer should keep up the good work because he/she doesn't know how this is affecting people's lives mentally.
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Post by Mbuye Chantail Chofi »

Thanks. What a great piece of poem and information.
For me, grace means getting what you don't deserve. The good things we receive from God which we don't deserve them.
Thanks.
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Post by Kgakgamatso Ranjafu »

An inspirational self motivating and guiding script. It gives a room of self introspection. It's excellently well aligned.
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Post by Jonathan Abioye »

This was a good read...

"To have fun in this life, without addiction, attachment, or desperate clinginess"

"To have calm endurance without laziness."

"To treat your flesh as your temple, but not your true self."

These lines made me recline, sigh and smile...
You understand...
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"To have fun in this life, without addiction, attachment, or desperate clinginess." This is it and we'll be less toxic to one another and full of internal peace.
There is more treasure in books than in all the pirate’s loot on Treasure Island.”

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Ofentse Jacob
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Post by Ofentse Jacob »

This poem Speaks! It hit too deep in me, where it says, "To be content, but not dead." Powerful!
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Post by Arie Kurniawan »

Okay, I think it's pretty good. But I think there are some points where I disagree. Life is a journey for everyone with a story that is certainly different from one another. It could be that this poem represents scott's life journey. I appreciate it
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Laimy Fenelon
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Post by Laimy Fenelon »

it is a really very inspiring text that speaks to us of these confused feelings that we encounter in our daily routine. and what is even more interesting with this text is that it invites us to surpass our inner self to have a much simpler but above all healthy life. thank you this is really uplifting.
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Post by Daddy Lukola BOFOSA »

What great wisdom on the part of the author!

What means thé grâce for me?
For me the grace means:"To love and forgive unconditionally, but only trust intelligently."
God bless you for This inspiration
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