What Grace Means to Me

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Theo Molebalwa
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Re: What Grace Means to Me

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I personally feel this was dedicated to me ❤️ it gave me meaning. I feel it's a great piece and can be read by the world at large🫂💜. I so much relate to the poem
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This is an amazing piece, what I see, are life principles that rather advice us to choose the positive aspect of life and make the most of every moment.
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Chimuanya Adazie wrote: 13 May 2023, 15:38 This is an amazing piece, what I see, are life principles that rather advice us to choose the positive aspect of life and make the most of every moment.
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This is an interesting piece. I think many people can relate to it. The struggle to lead a meaningful life rests squarely on the ability to find yourself without losing yourself, and I believe this piece showcases that precisely. I love the quote from The Aeneid.
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Post by Wieu Diing Wieu »

This a wonderful poem, it almost include every my life and my though, like to set boundaries without crossing boundaries.
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Post by Patrobas Kibet »

This is a great poem if you understand the words. It describes everything people are looking for as long as they are alive. Such irony😏
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Post by kilalo mjema »

I love how it just spoke to me, it’s refreshing to have to read and see how at times we put so much labels on ourselves or limit ourselves to them
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Post by Rosebud Awuah »

I think this poem talks about life and the art of balance. It talks how to peacefully live life and appreciate the little things. A great piece of work it is!
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Post by Grace N 2 »

This being the month of Grace, I think the poem was well thought. Talks about the balances of life which is kind of a struggle for most people.
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Such an incredible piece is worth sharing
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Post by Vino Subramoney »

It speaks to the best in a person - we'd do well to remember this.
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Post by Beatrice Oduor »

The peom is just amazing and encouraging, being what you should be not what people want you to be nor how people see you.. always be who you are
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Post by Amelia Zuriman »

These are the fine lines in life that we need to take note of. This poem is really relatable for me as I was wondering where are the lines. Everyone wants to live the life to the fullest but overachieving it would impact us negatively too.
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Post by Ashley Nekesa »

I just like how the poem cuts across the problems we encounter in our day to day activities.
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Post by Oju Olusegun Sunday »

To be successful without cutting corners. To be kind-hearted without being a weakling. To reign in life without compromising.
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