What Grace Means to Me

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Zainab Shahzad
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Graceful words beautifully put together :)
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Post by Yunus Rashid »

Wow this is like an inspiring poetry , the line to be kind but not dishonest has, has simply increased my faith, thanks so much , God bless u for that Scott hughes
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Wow, i just been motivated by pice of line that say , ( to be kind but not dishonest) it has truely increase my faith , thank u Scott hughes God bless u so much for that inspiring poem
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Post by Esther Atufe »

Grace
"To do, without trying"
This is a beautiful piece
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Post by Esther kangethe »

Nice poem explaining the life we living today, to achieve something good you have to sacrifice the other.
this caught me (To choose to turn your life around before it is too late and there is no life to turn around)
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I think the poem is all about life of a person , it advices us how to live our life in a good way. Live the life without regrets, made choices, attitude in others. If you will be successful you must not be proud instead you must be humble. The choices you made must be firm cause it will be harder if you will live your life with regrets.
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Post by Oaitse p Masanako »

A good piece with love motivation and inspiration
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Post by Seqhatsi Shata »

What an informative poem! It has got a good structure and a great rhythm to it.
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Post by BENARD SAPAYA »

I must appreciate Scott for the wonderful piece. I couldn't read through once only. It puts bare comparisons and contrasts that we need to decide on. In each case, with a moderated approach that is safe. I will not say again "Let me try" but just "Do" what I make my mind on. Regarding the rock bottom, I shouldn't allow more downwardness in a single life I have. I love it!
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Post by Bantu Chauke 2 »

An honest piece 👏👏👏
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Post by Erastus Kamande »

Wow such a masterpiece it identifies itself with the two sides of reality .I love it
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Post by Thadeus Odenyo »

Grace wants me to be a saint. she uses a puritanical yardstick.
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Post by Brenda Chikore »

Very inspiring l really needed this especially at a time like we are living in which is always negative. Thank you
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Post by Xolani Sagomba »

Poet displays the boundaries that spoil personal independence. Well thought. A beautiful piece.
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Post by Christopher Kariuki 1 »

Indeed that is what grace means 😊
Very encouraging,the rhythm is flowing,amd the words rhyming.
I love it 💕
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