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"Seduction"
Posted: 03 Apr 2019, 10:40
by JhenneRhapsody1989
" Seduction"
You're a Goddess sent from above and your Beauty is hard to ignore.
You're one of a kind bring me to temptation and like a fire burning me whole.
Re: "Seduction"
Posted: 04 Apr 2019, 21:40
by Ashley_Skyler
i like it nice use of relative feeling
Re: "Seduction"
Posted: 26 Jan 2020, 00:05
by Tobewankenobe
It feels a bit unfinished.
Re: "Seduction"
Posted: 04 Jul 2020, 04:07
by Jhenne_Rhapsody
Thank you for feed back. It's been a long time. I will take it as a compliment and motivation. It's time to sharpen my mind again.
Re: "Seduction"
Posted: 04 Jul 2020, 23:15
by NerdyAsh677
Nice metaphor but honestly it may sound like it but ignore and whole seems like doesn't sound that close