Words to Ponder

Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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DATo
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Post by DATo »

Humorous and philosophical in equal measure. I like it! Thanks for sharing!
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Outstanding! Beautifully written and worded. If a poem has to rhyme, it should be done just this way if it is to be fully enjoyed and understood. The tempo, the cadence, the tone, the flow are worked in exactly the right formula to bring the reader to the inevitable conclusion and truth. Exceptional writing! Absolutely loved it!
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Superb, one's clarity others confusion. I must say the poet is witty, smart and has great sense of humor.
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Nice.
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