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Just told the wind 

About my insecurities and fears

And all the nights i spent shedding tears

All the wars between wrong and right

About the things that are good and nice....

All those dreams I have in my heart

All those lovely places I wanna go from the start

Just told the wind...

About the weight of hopes

About the weight of dreams 

About the fear of unpredictable future 

About the things I couldn't bear 

Just told the wind...

And everytime breeze comes my way 

All soft and cool ,calming my soul

It soothes and takes all the worries away

And leave me thinking about why I must not give up on my dreams

Why should I work to convert all those blissful dreams into reality

Knowing it would not be easy and i might fail 

Bt why not give it a try 

It might be possible i'll be able to fly .

Thought-provoking. The rythm of your prose is interesting. Thank you, I enjoyed reading it.

mddodgen wrote: ↑18 Oct 2019, 12:15 Thought-provoking. The rythm of your prose is interesting. Thank you, I enjoyed reading it.

Thank you.

The poem has such nice imagery that I liked so much. It is okay, for having Told the Wind albeit, my caveat is don't throw caution to the wind.