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Senses
Posted: 12 Sep 2019, 12:52
by Ashley Louise
Even with unseeing eyes,
and unthinking brain,
ears that have heard too many lies,
and lips that have nearly drown in rain,
I still see your eyes, deep as the oceans endless waves.
Your mind like a maze,
and your heart that still saves.
Saves me from the dark suffocating haze.
Re: Senses
Posted: 14 Sep 2019, 15:27
by racelaine
This is beautiful!! There's a real imagery that comes with reading this. Very well written!
Re: Senses
Posted: 16 Sep 2019, 19:56
by Becs76
I agree, very well written and heartfelt
Re: Senses
Posted: 19 Sep 2019, 12:36
by Ashley Louise
racelaine wrote: ↑14 Sep 2019, 15:27
This is beautiful!! There's a real imagery that comes with reading this. Very well written!
Thank you so much! That means the world to me! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and thank you for taking the time to read it!
Re: Senses
Posted: 19 Sep 2019, 12:37
by Ashley Louise
Becs76 wrote: ↑16 Sep 2019, 19:56
I agree, very well written and heartfelt
Thank you so very much!

Re: Senses
Posted: 15 Oct 2019, 20:53
by nicole-adrianne
I hope I can find someone pure in heart in my life that will help me break through the haze of cynicism, as you've described in this lovely piece.
Re: Senses
Posted: 25 Jan 2020, 15:35
by Tobewankenobe
This is very romantic.
Re: Senses
Posted: 25 Jan 2020, 18:18
by Zion Mesa
Who's it about?