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Love poetry
Posted: 09 Nov 2019, 07:30
by Danzbby
What is love when there is no faith..
No commitment, No Space
How can you say you love me?
If you don’t know my place
Don’t let my love go to waste.
Re: Love poetry
Posted: 22 Nov 2019, 15:35
by nfdoughe
It's short, it's sweet, and I like the way the sounds move. I think it's beautiful.
Re: Love poetry
Posted: 25 Jan 2020, 15:27
by Tobewankenobe
Ah, that was abrupt, it seems full of frustration to me. Very clear message.
Re: Love poetry
Posted: 08 Nov 2020, 18:13
by Bburns3706
The opening sentence catches my intention right from the start. Great way to catch a reader's eye!