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Who wouldn't crave such a friend??

Posted: 28 Nov 2019, 12:41
by Daniel Muky
Last night I told dad I had a friend
But he never believed.
He patted my shoulder and counselled like a wise dad should:
"You don't have to lie my son
For I know you are shy.
You have tried,
And cried over your failure in the past
That you should have learnt to find contentment in loneliness.
Just so because you will never find  a friend."

It's then that I smiled and looked him in the eye.
I said dad you are right.
Right that I will never find a friend
For a friend has found me!
She's not pretty and complex like an Angel I once hoped for.
But plain and simple and easy to understand that I like her so.
She's without judgement.
And can keep a secret.
She keeps me company in a harmony only she can bring.
And she lends a listening ear.
Even when my conversations bring tears.
She never parts with me as long as I need her companionship.
And not in a word
That she ever complains about it.
Ain't it so,the kind of friend everyone would crave that I have?
Oh,
What a friend my diary is?

Re: Who wouldn't crave such a friend??

Posted: 29 Nov 2019, 01:55
by Ben Moore
A few emotional twists and turns in this one! Kept me guessing!

Re: Who wouldn't crave such a friend??

Posted: 14 Dec 2019, 17:12
by Daniel Muky
Ben Moore wrote: 29 Nov 2019, 01:55 A few emotional twists and turns in this one! Kept me guessing!
Ben..that's as much asy heart twists and turn to no end too...hope you liked it though. Thanks

Re: Who wouldn't crave such a friend??

Posted: 01 Jan 2020, 13:58
by nicole-adrianne
Cute poem :) sounds like the character in this piece may grow up to be a writer!

Re: Who wouldn't crave such a friend??

Posted: 09 Jan 2020, 14:31
by Daniel Muky
nicole-adrianne wrote: 01 Jan 2020, 13:58 Cute poem :) sounds like the character in this piece may grow up to be a writer!
Haha..maybe not...he just likes keeping diaries.. Thanks for appreciating