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No Longer

Posted: 23 Jan 2020, 23:24
by thisgirl818
I looked at you
Then I looked outside in the rain
And I've never felt so sad in my life
Than this moment

Everything is gray
And at the same time vividly colorful
It's funny how a little rain could emphasize
Such colors of the world

I looked at you once again
This time it's very clear beacuse I knew
I instantly knew
That I'm no longer in love with you

Re: No Longer

Posted: 24 Jan 2020, 01:02
by Zion Mesa
That's sad😭

Re: No Longer

Posted: 24 Jan 2020, 19:59
by Tobewankenobe
What a wonderful poem. So sombre, you cultivated a moving atmosphere in very few lines. I could tell it would be about loss or love, even so I felt the last line very much.