I FOUND YOU

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Wow, this is a nice poem Abigail01.
Harmony in chaos. It's all a matter of perspective.
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Clancy193 wrote: ↑24 Aug 2020, 09:14 Wow, the rythm is cool. Got an audio of this? I'd like to listen to it. Nice piece thanks for sharing!
Sure, it must be nice listening to. I also would love an audio.
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roulati wrote: ↑26 May 2020, 09:51 I Found You. New expressions, words, rythem, and new feelings while reading it. How it was expressed made me feel as if it was written for me.
Thanks for sharing and keep it up.
stay safe
Lol :lol2: obviously it was for me.
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This is such a beautiful piece of work. Finding a soulmate after going through pain is the best thing ever. Your theme is so straight to the point. Nice .
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D reviewer wrote: ↑13 Mar 2021, 18:45
Abigail09 wrote: ↑25 Aug 2020, 03:32
Clancy193 wrote: ↑24 Aug 2020, 09:14 Wow, the rythm is cool. Got an audio of this? I'd like to listen to it. Nice piece thanks for sharing!
Thanks for liking it :) :) :tiphat:. I don't have an audio but I can make one for you. Where should I send it? Not sure audio is allowed here.
Your poem is just perfect. I love every line. And the rhymes are so on point. If you have that audio I could send you my email to send it for me. Thanks
Sure😊.What's your email?
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Shillah A wrote: ↑21 Mar 2021, 08:36 This is such a beautiful piece of work. Finding a soulmate after going through pain is the best thing ever. Your theme is so straight to the point. Nice .

Thank You😇😇
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John Owen wrote: ↑21 Mar 2021, 04:07
roulati wrote: ↑26 May 2020, 09:51 I Found You. New expressions, words, rythem, and new feelings while reading it. How it was expressed made me feel as if it was written for me.
Thanks for sharing and keep it up.
stay safe
Lol :lol2: obviously it was for me.


Yes, You. Thank You 😊
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John Owen wrote: ↑21 Mar 2021, 04:05
Clancy193 wrote: ↑24 Aug 2020, 09:14 Wow, the rythm is cool. Got an audio of this? I'd like to listen to it. Nice piece thanks for sharing!
Sure, it must be nice listening to. I also would love an audio.
Sure. What's your email address?
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John Owen wrote: ↑21 Mar 2021, 04:04 Wow, this is a nice poem Abigail01.
Thanks a lot. Appreciated😇😇
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Nice poem

I did not understand the lines below, how is wanting to be loved like the flu

"I have wanted to feel love and feel loved.
Just like ‘The flu"
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Your wording is thoughtful, the flow is soothing, and you've written a lovely poetry. Excellent work.
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This reads like a song. You could put music to this.
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Bookich wrote: ↑20 Apr 2020, 23:28 While I was reading it, I imagined it being read as a spoken word... The initial verses Acapella until the first "I Found You" I can then hear the soft rhythms of jazz music whisping your voice as I envisioned your newfound happiness. Great stuff! Feels like finding love for the first time.
What a vivid imagination you have!
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