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Sweating unsweetened sweat
Sweetening her sweating soul
Sweat sourcing sweet in sweat
Stressing sweat to save her seed
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Sweat sweetens saving the son
Sweating to save him sweat
Sweat sweetens if son doesn't sweat
So is Son, when not stressed
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Spending saturdays sweating under the sun
Sacrificing Sunday service selling
Seven days search for the son's survival
Ceases several societal socials
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Suffering in silence
Serving and starving
Starving and smiling
Smiling in struggle
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Struggle gives her scars
Scars degrade her status
Status makes her sweat
Sweat makes her son smile
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Wonderful use of assonance, consonance and word play. S, s, s... Wonderful but packed with a heavy message on the sacrifices of motherhood.

Wonderful use of assonance, consonance and word play. S, s, s... Wonderful but packed with a heavy message on the sacrifices of motherhood.