Midnight Blues

Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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thisgirl818
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Midnight Blues

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It's midnight
Yet here I am wide awake
Thinking of the ways
Of how to teach my heart
To beat without you
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Wow! It is amazing. Please continue this one.
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Alexandra1234
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It's really good. Well done! I'd like to read the rest of it.
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Finish it!!

...or is that all? Is it a mysterious poem that will always keep the reader yearning for more?...please, no, it is so promising! Please finish it! It's great!
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Short but sweet. Good one.👍👍
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