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Letting Go

Posted: 24 May 2020, 06:53
by thisgirl818
Standing in a lightless balcony
Listening to the rhythm of the falling rain
I let the coldness wrap around me
How do you find yourself
When the hand you hold
Is letting go?

Re: Letting Go

Posted: 25 May 2020, 10:26
by Samwisekoop
"How do you find yourself
When the hand you hold
Is letting go?"

Well done! Sad, but beautiful...like "the lightless balcony amongst the falling rain".