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Floating through the vast blue sky
Atmosphere is all lost to me.
I wander with the dashing winds
I glide along with those who fly.
Higher, higher I will rise
I wonder if I'll be a star
Just a couple miles high.
Galaxies seem moments away.
Until I am broken, falling from the sky.
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"I glide along with those who fly.
Higher, higher I will rise
I wonder if I'll be a star"

I like this allusion to greatness, sort of a metaphor.
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ReyvrexQuestor Reyes wrote: ↑10 Jun 2020, 21:35 "I glide along with those who fly.
Higher, higher I will rise
I wonder if I'll be a star"

I like this allusion to greatness, sort of a metaphor.
Thank you! :D
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