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Where to now?
Where have I been?
It's all one big circle
That comes around again.
Where to now?
Why to you?
Do you know the trouble you've put me through?
Off again
To something new...
Oh, hello...again, it's you.
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The poem is amazing! I love that you made it seem inevitable.
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The world is round, the farther you venture out, the nearer you return back via the other side. I reckon, I
should pity the flat-earthers of ancient times who made the wrong notions. You have a poetic humor.
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ReyvrexQuestor Reyes wrote: ↑06 Jun 2020, 18:32 The world is round, the farther you venture out, the nearer you return back via the other side. I reckon, I
should pity the flat-earthers of ancient times who made the wrong notions. You have a poetic humor.
I too pity the flat-earthers. I mean that is such depressing way of thinking if you think about it. Glad my thoughts got through! Thank you for stopping by for commenting! :D
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